Audience Feedback

We asked our media class to give feedback on our video so far as we felt they had an informed idea of the criteria and would be able to give constructive criticism.

Looking at our audience feedback we saw a recurring issue that it was 'repetetive' and 'needed something extra' which we decideed to add in after so many people suggesting it. 

We sat down as a group and decided what the extra something could be.

We wanted to portray our protaganist as being trapped as this is what our lyrics presented to us. 

We came up with the idea to show her committing suicide by jumping/walking into a lake. We were inspired when we heard about how author Virginia Woolf killed herself by putting stones in her pockets and walking into a lake.  

Here are the shots that we filmed today.