Audience Feedback (2)

After adding in our narrative we wanted to collect some feedback to make sure the message came across well enough and if the ending was powerful enough. The ending is what we wanted to make really dramatic and slightly ambiguous in order to  leave the audience shocked and slightly confused to encourage them to re watch the video. 

As the lake was very shallow we didn't like the effect of actually showing the protagonist in the lake therefore thought it may work well to have the jump in slow motion and then sped up to an empty lake. We got some feedback from the AS class as they have an informed idea of media elements but have not seen the struggles along the way therefore we thought they'd be able to give a non bias opinion. 

Many of them understood the ending and liked the concept which was a relief. They also mentioned many of our editing techniques that they liked and the mixture between performance and narrative. However many said that the ending may be a bit too abrupt and should be faded out a little bit which is easily fixed and that is what we will be working on fixing up until the deadline.